Today we want you to spend this lesson editing and redrafting your narrative for 'The Clock Tower'.  What improvements and up levelling can you do?  Remember you need to tell the whole story.


Remember to focus on:

  • figurative language
  • show not tell
  • micro expressions
  • think about your audience - mood and audience


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Good luck with this task.


Miss Gregory and Mrs Terry